Archive for October, 2009
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NaNoWriMo is coming. Are you ready…?
(I’m still undecided about whether or not I’m going to join. As always, I probably won’t decide until November 1st around midafternoon.)
Author of the Week – Women’s Fiction Author Shobhan Bantwal
Posted by JM in Guest Posts on October 28, 2009
Sharing the Beauty and Culture of India Through My Writing
I more or less stumbled into my writing career. I had never written anything more creative than a class essay or thesis for my master’s degree until I hit the age of 50. I call it my “menopausal epiphany.” Along with hot flashes, weight gain, hair loss, and insomnia, I discovered a deep need to write fiction.
For years I had been complaining about the dearth of romantic Indian fiction. Most every South Asian author seems to write literary novels, serious slice-of-life stories that are beautiful works of prose, but are lacking in plot and drama. So when I took up creative writing, I decided to try my hand at romantic stories with a distinctly Indian twist.
I was treading unknown waters with my unusual brand of ethnic women’s fiction with romantic elements, and I knew it was a serious risk. There was no guarantee that a literary agent or publisher would like this type of literature. And yet I wanted to write about my culture in all its multi-hued beauty as well as its dark side. I wanted to tell stories that were realistic and yet dramatic enough to make fun, page-turning fiction. What I longed to create was “Bollywood in a Book.”
My Indian culture, with its arranged marriages, spicy cuisine, quaint customs like dowry, and a religion that has many gods and goddesses, offers great opportunities for unusual stories. I had so much fodder to populate my books with that I often had to curb my tendency to put in an overdose of cultural detail. India is a land of controversy, where women are allowed certain freedoms but not others, where women are often considered liabilities and men are cherished as assets, where marriage can occur between two people who have never known each other and yet they can live in a happy, lifelong commitment. India’s culture is beautiful and colorful, yet there are harsh, even shocking facets to it.
I set out to put all these elements alongside the colorful silk saris and lehengas, the pungent spices, and the vivid hues of India in my tales. The result is three books to date, THE DOWRY BRIDE, THE FORBIDDEN DAUGHTER, and THE SARI SHOP WIDOW. A fourth book is slated for release in 2010.
The video trailer of THE SARI SHOP WIDOW can be viewed at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9uRlbkxxes. My writing, photos, and recipes are available on my website: www.shobhanbantwal.com
Thank you so much for hosting me on your wonderful blog.
Calls for Submissions – Erotica/Romance
Posted by JM in Publication Opportunities on October 26, 2009
Slash Books Call For Submissions – “Kink Bingo”
X marks the spot for this anthology, where each story utilizes a different kink to fill in a square on the Slash Books Kink Bingo card! Pitching for this anthology is simple: pick a kink, and let your imagination run wild! We’ll be looking for stories from 2000 to 20000 words that explore the fun and wild side of kinks. As usual, all stories must include at least one same sex relationship. Your story should focus on the relationship. Intriguing characters and interesting situations are the ticket to success here. Be creative! All genres welcome. (Four days ’til the deadline!).
Like the Knave of Hearts: Circlet Press.
What if Alice returned to Wonderland as an adult, and met up with the White Knight or the Red Queen again? What if there was more going on between the Queen of Hearts and the Knave than just those tarts? And what kind of adventures was Mary Ann, the White Rabbits maid, up to when she wasn’t at home? We’re looking for a darker, sexier view of Wonderland. Be creative, keep it legal, and don’t be afraid to explore your nightmares as well as your dreams.
*Found at EREC
Sunday Scribblings 186 – Shame
Posted by JM in Sunday Scribblings on October 25, 2009
I read once that there’s only one emotion that is just as powerful in recollection as it is on the spot. You know, when you remember an instance of being happy or sad, you don’t re-experience the full happiness or sadness you were feeling then, but when you remember feeling shame, you have a physical reaction and it’s just as powerful as when it was fresh. Crazy.
Jane had always been a good little girl. She tried to make everyone happy, tried to be kind to everyone and even remember the golden rule enough to apply it to her tiny life.
She happily attended Sunday School nearly every Sunday at the family church. She didn’t know many people there, but that was okay; she knew friendship would come.
One day, as a class project, they each got a piece of paper with about a dozen words on it. They were to circle the words that meant good things and cross out the things that were sinful. Jane, smiling, finished the assignment quickly and handed her paper over.
The teacher looked at Jane’s paper and frowned, making Jane feel uneasy. What had she done wrong?
“Jane, you circled pride,” the teacher said. The teacher then looked directly at Jane. “Pride is not a good thing! Pride is sinful and wrong! Where did you get the idea that pride is a good thing?”
The disgust on the teacher’s face both confused and terrified young Jane. She didn’t understand what she had done or why she had incurred such wrath with a wrong answer. All she knew in that moment was that she’d been a very, very bad little girl and that to take pride in anything was shameful and sinful.
“Pride is sinful!”
With shame flooding her very being, Jane hung her head and then nodded. She’d always been told that being proud of the good things you do is good, but maybe the other adults had it wrong…
From that moment on, Jane made it a point to never take pride in any of her accomplishments. She got rid of pride by always telling herself that nothing was ever good enough. If nothing was good enough, she couldn’t possibly take pride in it, could she?
She had a few ‘moments of weakness’, as she called them. The times when she didn’t have a firm grip on her feelings and a little bit of pride over a good grade or a project done well slipped through. Her memories took care of those, though.
Whenever she had even a moment’s feeling of pride, all the shame and embarrassment from her childhood experience flooded through her, sometimes driving her to tears.
Later in her teenage years, Jane learned the true difference between boastful pride and good pride. Even so, it was too late for Jane. Logic couldn’t overcome emotions and long-learned responses.
No matter what she did, no matter what anyone said to her, she never truly took pride in her accomplishments. She accepted compliments graciously, as she had been taught, but she never let them past the hard shell that no one could ever see.
High school and then university graduation with great grades and honours did nothing to change her feelings. Medals and certificates for arts and community accomplishments were kept but stowed away in boxes in her attic. Living independently, paying off her university loans, having a stable and secure job…
…meeting and marrying the love of her life…
She never let herself take any pride in even the smallest detail.
At twenty-eight years old, Jane gave birth to her daughter Eliza, a healthy baby with a head full of blond hair like her daddy. As Jane looked at her daughter for the first time, knowing that this was the baby she had cared for as best she could for just over eight and a half months, she felt the most pride she’d ever felt in her life. The feeling swelled within her, making her eyes tear up and her heart feel as if it would burst out of her chest.
Like in all the other times in her life, the shame followed the pride and threatened to tear down all the positive feelings within her. All the cruel whispers within her rallied to knock her away from the warmth she now felt coursing through her. The triggers had been well placed and the response was well-trained, as it was always the same.
Yet, this time…
Little Eliza opened her eyes and squeaked a little before settling back against her mother’s breast. Jane gently bit her bottom lip and smiled, the tears falling to her cheeks.
Finally, for the first time since childhood, she shoved the shame aside. Though she had always been convinced her accomplishments were nothing to be proud of, no one – not even the programming of her youth – could convince her that tiny Eliza was anything to be ashamed about.
Call for Submissions: Angels and Demons Anthology
Posted by JM in Publication Opportunities on October 25, 2009
Angels for whom heaven is not enough. Demons searching for redemption in a mortal’s arms. Seraphim, nephilim, heaven’s warriors or creatures from the pits of hell—love could be waiting for them all.
Samhain Publishing invites you to step into the light or embrace the forces of darkness with stories of angels and demons from any mythology. Will your angels be wicked and your demons be wanton? Only you can decide on which side of heaven or hell they’ll fall.
Samhain Publishing is seeking submissions for their Spring 2010 demons and angels themed anthology. Stories can be of any genre or heat level, and submissions are open to M/F, M/M, or multiples thereof, but all submissions must feature either an angel or demon theme (or both!) as integral to the story. Submissions should be 20,000 to 30,000 words in length.
Submissions are open to all authors previously published with Samhain as well as authors aspiring to publish with Samhain. Submissions must be new material, previously published material will not be considered.
Additionally, manuscripts previously submitted, whether individually or for past anthologies, will not be considered either. Please be aware that manuscripts submitted to this anthology cannot be resubmitted at a later date unless by invitation from an editor. However, submissions with merit for possible publication at Samhain are and will be passed to interested Samhain editors even if not chosen for the angels and demons anthology.
Chosen manuscripts will be published as separate ebooks under their individual titles in Spring 2010 but will be combined as one print title for Winter 2010 print release.
To submit a manuscript for consideration please include the full manuscript (of 20,000 to 30,000 words) with a comprehensive 2-3 page synopsis in addition to a letter of introduction/query letter which details the genre, heat level and story length. Full manuscripts are required.
As well, when you send your manuscript, please be sure to use the naming convention Title_AngelsDemons_MS and Title_AngelsDemons_Synopsis. This will ensure that your submission doesn’t get missed in the many submissions we receive, and makes it easy for me to find in my ebook reader.
Submissions are open until November 1st and final decision will be made by November 16th.
Submissions and questions can be directed to Angela James at editor@samhainpublishing.com Please put Angels and Demons Anthology in the subject line.
**permission to forward granted**
Artist’s Afternoon
When I went to bed New Year’s Eve night, I looked at my copy of The Artist’s Way and realized that I’d had the book for a year already. Longer than that – it had been a Christmas present in 2007. While I had the best of intentions in 2008 to use it, take Artist’s Days, do morning pages… it somehow got lost like so many other things.
I decided that, instead of trying to guilt myself into doing the ‘program’ for artists (of any kind) in the book and likely just stressing myself, I would incorporate one thing at a time. The two main staples of The Artist’s Way are Morning Pages and Artist Dates.
For where I am right now, I decided that Artist Dates would be the best for me to incorporate into my life. I could explain why I chose them over Morning Pages, but it’s not necessary for this post.
My Artist’s Date/Day quickly turned into an Artist’s Afternoon when I didn’t get as much work done over the weekend as I wanted to. That was okay, though, because the point was to get out there and take time for my writing. I could work on the duration later. My husband came home from work early because he was feeling ill, which ended up pushing my ‘out the door’ deadline back even further. But I still prevailed!
I went to the library and, for a few glorious hours, I just worked on my novels. (I have two vying for my attention and I don’t mind working on them both right now.) The feeling of having a specific chunk of time just for my writing, away from home… Wonderful. The whole thing was just wonderful.
The Artist’s Date isn’t meant specifically for getting out of the house to go write somewhere else for a while. You’re meant to woo your inner writer (painter/singer/actor) any way you choose. For the moment, my inner writer just wants to feel safe. She just wants to know that her time to write is important.
Thus, for me, I’ll be taking myself out for writing dates.
Do/have you used The Artist’s Way?
A Breath of Fresh Air – How to Take a Break Without Braking
Posted by JM in General, Writer's Block on October 22, 2009
Honestly? I have been a bit sick of writing about the same subjects day in and day out. I try to take breaks, but it doesn’t really work out because I write for a living. As in, to pay bills. This is my job, and I certainly don’t hear other people talking about just not working for a day because they ‘just don’t feel like it’. (Okay, so plenty of people have pulled a sickie, but not on a consistent basis.)
So what is a poor, worn down, tired writer to do?
Keep writing, of course.
You would think that the natural solution to my predicament would be to just take a vacation and stop writing for a while. I have done that in the past, but that only makes it hard to get back into the swing of things when the vacation is over.
So how do you take a break from writing without putting the brakes on your writing?
The answer is so simple, and that’s probably why we forget it so easily: Write something different.
Many bloggers get together and breathe new life into each other’s blogs by guest posting. While I wasn’t exactly enthused with the idea at first, I wasn’t about to turn down guest posts for my sites and I felt like I should repay the gesture.
I am so incredibly glad I did.
By writing about different subjects for once, I regained my enthusiasm for blogging. I wrote not one but about ten posts for various sites, and it felt great! I remembered why I like writing and blogging so much.
So if you’re feeling a bit ‘sick and tired’ of what you’re working on, try something new! Be it a guest post (ahem), a writing prompt, or something else. Give your mind and your creativity a breath of fresh air without stopping writing.
Guest Author Sylvia Engdahl on Earning Money Writing
Posted by JM in Guest Posts on October 21, 2009
Because I’ve written Young Adult novels and my name was once fairly well known in that field, I sometimes get questions from high school students who have been assigned to find out about potential careers by interviewing someone in a field that interests them. These kids assume that a person can plan on writing novels as a way to earn a living. They’ve been given a questionnaire to be filled out. Rarely do any of the questions apply to me — or to any writer other than an author of bestsellers.
The first advice I have for any aspiring writer is to forget any thought of living on the proceeds — or receiving any money at all, for that matter. Short of producing a bestseller, the only way of earning enough to live on by writing fiction is to have a backlist of many successful books that have stayed in print, which is becoming less and less possible nowadays. In any case, it is much too far ahead to plan for. Write because you have a story to tell and enjoy telling it, not because you hope to sell it. The vast majority of writers have some other source of income, not just when they start out, but always.
The expectation of income, or even of publication, stifles creativity. When I wrote my first novel Enchantress from the Stars I believed it was unpublishable because it was obviously not an adult novel, yet in that era it was too long and too complex for a children’s book (there was no distinct Young Adult classification in the 70s). Yet the story took hold of me and I couldn’t leave it alone.
To my surprise, it did get published and became a Newbery Honor book, and in later years won several more awards; but it didn’t support me except for a year or two, quite recently, when subsidiary rights were sold. My other YA books, which I wrote with publication in mind, got good reviews but were considered less creative and were far less successful in terms of sales. Then for many years I had no more fiction ideas, which was frustrating because my publisher wanted more from me and even small sums of money such as my past books had earned would have been important to me during those years.
Long afterward, I got the idea for Stewards of the Flame. It was an adult novel, unsuitable for the market in which my name was known, and I knew it wouldn’t meet the marketing demands of the science fiction genre either, since it wasn’t slanted toward readers with a lot of background in that genre. Again, I wrote without expectation of publication simply because I couldn’t let go of the idea, and I found my long-dormant creativity restored. When it was finished I published it myself. Write because you care about your story, not because you look on writing as a potential career.
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Sylvia Engdahl is best known as the author of highly-acclaimed Young Adult science fiction novels, one of which was a Newbery Honor book and a finalist for the 2002 Book Sense Book of the Year in the Rediscovery category. However, her trilogy Children of the Star, originally written for teens, was republished as adult SF, and she is now writing fiction only for adults.
Engdahl is a strong advocate of space colonization and has maintained a widely-read space section of her website for many years. She lives in Eugene, Oregon, and currently works as a freelance editor of nonfiction anthologies.
More information about Stewards of the Flame, the topics with which it deals, and its newly-released sequel can be found at www.stewardsoftheflame.com. Her main website is at www.sylviaengdahl.com.
Creativity on Demand: Ten Ways to Get Your Brain Going on Scheduled Time
Whether we think it’s necessary for good writing or not, most of us would love to have a set block of time each day for sitting down and letting the creativity flow. It doesn’t always work that way. Even if you are fortunate enough to make the time and have the energy for daily writing, the creativity flow tends to cooperate when it wishes.
However, there are ways you can encourage the muse and open the creative floodgates. Here are just some suggestions on getting started.
1. Brief meditation.
Even a few minutes of meditation before you start writing can help clear your mind and get things going.
2. Play some word association (like Unconscious Mutterings).
If nothing else, it will have you wondering why in the world you associated some words with others…
3. Do some mind mapping.
Easy, creative, and you can combine words with drawings and whatever else you want. It’s an excellent tool for releasing your creativity.
4. Stretch.
Get the blood flowing and you might just find that you’re thinking a bit more clearly. Try doing it a few times while you’re writing (just being mindful not to break any flows of creativity).
5. Schedule writing time away from home (café, library, train station).
Strangely enough, some of my best ideas and character profiles have come to me while sitting at the train station. I usually don’t go there for the sole purpose of writing, but I always make sure to have a pen and paper with me when I go.
6. Start at the end.
Or wherever you usually don’t start. Switching up your writing style – or just attempting to – can open up things in interesting and sometimes unexpected ways.
7. Turn off the distractions.
Radio, television, internet, emails, etc… Turn them all off, close them, put them away… Anything that might distract you in your writing must go.
8. Read back.
Take a few (I repeat: a few) minutes and look back over other things you’ve written. You may get some new ideas or get yourself in the mood for a rewrite.
9. Switch up.
Try writing from a different character’s point of view, try imagining what your best friend would write, or even do some writing from an ‘alter ego’ point of view. The key is to make it different.
10. Reward yourself.
There is nothing wrong with saying, “If I get to X words today, I’m having a piece of cake.” Just don’t make it cake every night and don’t make ‘x’ too easy.
Are there any tools or tricks you use to help inspire and motivate yourself?
Call for Submissions: Permanent Vacation: Living and Working in Our National Parks
Posted by JM in Publication Opportunities on October 19, 2009
Bona Fide Books is seeking literary essays about your experience working in our national parks, from Denali to the Everglades, Yellowstone to Yosemite. Some go seeking commune with nature; others to escape. Diverse park experiences are desired. Although we enjoy tree-hugging epiphanies, we also want to read about day-to-day life, and societal, environmental, and existential implications of living in the park. What happened there, and how did it influence your life? Writers will receive $100 for their story and one copy of the collection.
Check out this page for guidelines.




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