Archive for March, 2010
Love Your Characters – and Kill Them
Posted by JM in Characters on March 29, 2010
I feel like the antagonist of a novel, posting with a title like this.
I was reading my Christmas present today, Crusader by Sara Douglass, to find to my great dismay my two favorite characters were killed off! Just like that and in a rotten, terrible way, no less. I was upset by this turn of events so much I had to put the book down for a while.
Now, this doesn’t happen with ever book I (or you) read, but I have been reading this series for six years. It’s no wonder I don’t exactly appreciate the death of the two. (Don’t worry; I won’t betray any spoilers.)
However, through my great annoyance, I found an interesting blog topic.
Character love is something many a writer has fallen into. However, such a thing (besides being somewhat hard for the non-writer to understand) can be quite detrimental to your story.
When you love someone, you want the best for them. Before you realize it, your loved character or characters may find themselves getting an easy route away from the enemy, a gorgeous man or woman to love, or inexplicably finding out he, she, or they is/are royalty!
I don’t mean to insult anyone who has used one or more of those situations – I have. If you can do it well, by all means, go ahead and do it.
What I am getting at is if you love a character too much – yes, it is possible – then you will likely, at least on a subconscious level, want to make things easier for them.
I can already hear someone saying, “Yeah, maybe other writers, but not me.”
There is another side to character love as well. Perhaps, just to prove me and other people who have pointed this out wrong, you throw many conflicts in your character’s way. He, she, or they constantly run into the enemy, only less than lovely people in appearance and personality will fall in love with him/her/them, and they were royalty, only to find out there was a mistake and they are actually peasants!
While amusing, this doesn’t quite work either. (Well, it could if you try hard. I invite you to prove me wrong.)
What would most often happen in that instance would be your character(s) would have a lot of meaningless battles, and/or your character(s) would suddenly have powers or abilities which just don’t make sense in respect to the pace of the plot.
Conflict makes your story universe go round. Letting character love influence your writing unbalances the universe.
I’ve fallen in love with a few of my characters before, and it makes for bad writing most of the time. I promise. It’s okay for you to care about your characters while you’re writing, but keep in mind you should be willing to kill them at any moment to further your plot.
So carry on writing with that in mind. I know some are protesting, saying the character or characters can’t die because they have to do a, b, and c. That’s perfectly fine. But let that be the only thing that keeps you from being willing to shove them off a cliff at any moment.
Remember, you’re doing it for the universe.
(Not sure how to kill ‘em off. Check out Eight Ways to Kill Your Characters.)
Eight Ways to Kill Your Character(s)
Posted by JM in Characters on March 26, 2010
1. Ritual Sacrifice – Nothing beats a good sacrifice. Whether your character has grown up knowing his or her fate or whether your character is an unwilling participant, a sacrifice to a god always makes things dramatic. (Whether or not the god plays a part in your story is up to you, of course.)
2. Other Sacrifice – Oh, the most noble of things – your character throwing himself or herself to death for honor, love, or anything the character considers worth dying for. If played right, you can get strong reactions out of your readers by doing this. Just don’t do it too much.
3. Assassination – Assassination, mystery, intrigue. Oh, there are so many things you can do with assassination. The (reader) known assassin vs. the unknown assassin. The assassin with a mission of honor vs. the assassin who does it for the money. The possibilities are many.
4. “It’s All in the Family” Murder – Murder within the family? Is there a disinherited sibling? Perhaps an unwanted child coming into the realization s/he’s missed out on his/her rightful place in life. No matter what the reason, murder within the family can always put in more plot tangles than you can think of.
5. Poison – The art of poisoning is a delicate one, but it can serve a number of purposes. Whether you want to kill your character in dramatic, fast fashion or slowly, poison can be your safe bet. However, be prepared to do some research on the subject. You don’t want to try poisoning someone with basil. You could try, though.
6. Forces of Nature – It’s unfortunate and random, which is why forces of nature could be just the method of death you are looking for. Floods, rock slides, avalanches – all can happen without warning. (Well, the floods do have a bit of warning, but dams breaking and such are likely to be unexpected. This method, I believe, is more one to keep in the back of your mind.
7. Death by Deity – There’s nothing like a godly hand intervening to strike down your character. Be careful with this one, though, because your deities should have good motives for killing the one character and not others.
8. Possession – This alternative provides the ability to get rid of the character personality, but keep the body. This can enable you to cause conflicts all over in your writing. Whether you care to focus on where the previous owner’s soul is and if it can be retrieved, or if you prefer focusing on the now and figuring out how to deal with the new soul, this method of killing of a character can definitely keep your hand writing or fingers typing.
Submissions Call for 2011 Anthology
Posted by JM in Publication Opportunities on March 25, 2010
Twelfth Planet Press is announcing a reading period for Speakeasy, a new anthology to be launched at Natcon50 in Perth 2011.
With Prohibition in full force in the US, speakeasies were all the rage, cocaine was still legal and the Charleston, the Shimmy and The Bunny Hog were in their heyday! Art deco influenced the faces of cities, jazz music was widely popular, eyeshadow was very heavy, the women’s suffrage movement made major progress and movies got sound. The Roaring Twenties was the era of Charlie Chaplin, Joan Crawford, Albert Einstein, Greta Garbo and Niels Bohr. King George V was on the throne in the UK, Mussolini had power in Italy, Hitler wrote Mein Kampf and King Tutankhamun’s tomb was discovered.
Speakeasy is a roaring, lively and exciting new original anthology, edited by Alisa Krasnostein and published by Twelfth Planet Press. It will blend art deco with urban fantasy, the Charleston with the vampire and the flapper with the noir detective. It will be fast paced, action packed and well dressed. Stories in the vein of Dorothy Parker’s “Flappers: A Hate Song” will also be considered.
Stories for Speakeasy should be original, unpublished fantasy stories of between 2,500 wds and 7,500 wds, set in the 1920s and fun.
How: send your submission in rtf attachment to submissions@twelfthplanetpress.com
Length: stories should be between 2 500 and 7 500 words
Submissions will open June 1 and close September 30, 2010.
Payment: AUS$50 per story
That Moving Thing
This moving house (technically flat) thing is totally kicking my ass.
Or, let me clarify: The stress caused by moving house (and other things) has caused me to catch a cold/flu/resurgence of glandular fever that is totally kicking my ass.
I hate it when I go quiet on my blogs, but I haven’t been able to help it lately. Between the absolute fantastic times I have been having with my mental health lately, the moving, the absolute lack of energy from being sick… Needless to say, blogging has been right up there with all the other things I want to do but just haven’t had the energy to get to.
Things seem to be looking up today, though, and I managed the energy to shower (yay!), get on a train and meet the Bloke at his workplace. Even better, I did some writing. Sure, I didn’t forward the story any on my WIP, but I now have the slightly disturbed, guilt-ridden past of my main character.
We all have to start somewhere, right?
I’m not kidding myself; I’m not expecting to get any writing (besides work writing) done until we’re unpacked and in the new unit. But that makes the times I do write all the sweeter.
I’m likely just being lazy about writing. Have you moved before? Did you write consistently while going through the process? Did you write at all?
Come on… Guilt me into making more time for writing.
Quick Announcement: InkyBlots Blog Carnival
Posted by JM in Announcements on March 16, 2010
I originally planned to put up the next edition of the blog carnival on April 5th. However, the lease on the unit I’m moving to starts on April 6th, which means I’m going to be busy sorting, packing, moving and unpacking for a while.
I’m rescheduling and plan on putting up the blog carnival on Monday, April 12th.
Unfortunately, the silly site won’t let me change the dates, so the deadline is still the same (last Friday of March).
Go here to submit your blog posts.
Call for Submissions: Soundzine
Posted by JM in Publication Opportunities on March 15, 2010
*Call courtesy of Tooth Soup
Soundzine is a
literary e-zine that features poetry and prose from around the world accompanied by spoken recordings of each piece by the author or a voice actor, and artwork specifically chosen by an artistic director to complement the imagery present in the piece.
Soundzine is now up to its tenth issue, and we’re again looking for submissions to join our ever-growing archive of excellent spoken word. To celebrate our milestone we moved into new digs at http://www.soundzine.net where our ‘Green’ themed tenth issue can now be perused, consumed, or ambled through at your leisure. I think you’ll agree that the quality of poetry and prose that can be found throughout all of the issues is of a high standard, and the added bonus of actually hearing the words spoken aloud is one that is rare in e-journals.
Soundzine is now looking for submissions to its eleventh issue, with the theme of ‘Sapphic’. Anything related to Sapphic goes. By Lesbians. About Lesbians. About Sappho. In Sapphics. Be Sapphic.
In my role as prose editor at Soundzine, I’m looking for any short stories or flash fiction you wish to send in. We have an 800 word maximum (mainly to keep reading times, and therefore file sizes, manageable) and we follow the Voiceworks school of thought with respect to the theme, i.e.:
- Themed work = good
- Good work = better
- Good, themed work = BEST
So if you don’t feel like you can write to our theme, don’t worry! Send in your best work and we’ll see what we can do about getting you into our next issue.
Prose submissions can be sent to prose [at] soundzine [dot] net, while everything else (poetry, articles, pitches) can be sent to submissions [at] soundzine [dot] org and we have a pretty quick turnaround on everything. The due date for issue 11 is June 15th.
Please, tell your friends, retweet this, and get the word around. I’ll be posting further calls as we get closer to the deadline. If you have any further questions regarding submissions, feel free to contact me on twitter @toothsoup. Now g’arn, get writing. (:
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Call for Submissions: Chicken Soup for the Soul
Posted by JM in Publication Opportunities on March 15, 2010
Chicken Soup for the Soul: Think Positive
101 Inspirational Stories about Counting Your Blessings and Having a Positive Attitude
This title is a continuation of the theme of our very popular past titles – Chicken Soup for the Soul: Count Your Blessings and Chicken Soup for the Soul: Tough Times, Tough People. We are looking for stories of optimism, faith and strength to encourage our readers to think positive in these challenging times.
What was the situation that inspired you to think positive? What changes did you make in your attitude — from negative to positive — that turned your life around? These inspirational stories will remind readers to focus on hope and show them that each day holds something to be grateful for.
Here are some suggested topics, but we know you can think of many more:
Attitude! It does make a difference
The unexpected benefits of challenges
Putting things in perspective
Turning negative into positive
How you spread the message of gratitude to others
Lighten up and laugh!
What made you realize that your life is good and that you are grateful
Silver linings that you have discovered
Appreciating the simple pleasures
… Anything else that you think that is interesting and inspirational
If your story is chosen, you will be a published author and your bio will be printed in the book if you so choose. You will also receive a check for $200 and 10 free copies of your book, worth more than $100. You will retain the copyright for your story and you will retain the right to resell it.
SUBMISSIONS GO TO http://chickensoup.com
Select the Submit Your Story link on the left tool bar and follow the directions.
DEADLINE IS APRIL 30, 2010.






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