Archive for August, 2010

Five Tips for Growing Your Organic Novel

Yesterday I talked about how novels are more organic than solid. Yes, novel writing is taught, but there is no one way to write a novel (or short story). Even in your personal experience, one idea may come to you quietly while some may smack you over the head and drag you along for the ride.

How do you encourage your stories to be unique and organic? Here are five tips on how you can encourage the full organic experience from your novel or short story:

Always carry a paper and pen with you. I know I always say this, but there is a reason I say it.

Write in different places. Comfort isn’t everything. Some writers need perfect conditions to write but that dramatically decreases the amount of time you can actually spend writing. It’ll be good for your writing for you to get out and about as well.

Let your novel lead. I said this yesterday and I’ll say it again: You never write a novel the exact same way twice. Don’t base decisions about your current work in progress on your last project.

Don’t be too controlling. Experiment or try things you. Even if you write yourself into a dead end or a place you didn’t expect, no material need be wasted. Maybe you can use it for something else.

Have fun. If writing is always work for you, then you’re doing the wrong thing.

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The Organic Novel

Novel and short story writing is often taught, but any writer will tell you that there is no one way to write a novel. Some outline, some don’t. Some let the characters lead while others let the world be the dominant force.

No matter how you do it, I’m willing to venture you don’t write novels the same way twice.

I think of novels as a bit of a more organic thing than something I simply sit down and write. Each novel takes me in a different way. My current work in progress is presenting itself to me in little bits and pieces, none of which are in order. I have had novels keep me up at night because I simply had to finish writing that chapter or scene. I have completely outlined a novella before writing it, and I have also outlined absolutely nothing.

Sometimes the characters lead. Actually, with my work, the characters often lead, but even that varies from story to story.

As it should.

The organic novel is a good thing. It means that not every novel is the same in a very basic and perhaps even slightly subconscious way. The way your novel takes you in your writing it (by the hair, by the balls, or a more gentle approach) is often the way it will take your reader.

While your reader may not have to take a midnight cemetery ghost tour to really capture the essence of the book, the fact that your novel demanded that of you just goes to show that each one is and should be different.

Don’t resist where your novel takes you. Let it lead. You can always edit later.

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Writing Horror – What Scares You?

The other day I got to thinking about horror. Since I arrived in Australia, I have become immersed in the speculative fiction world. (If you’re not familiar with the term, it covers most science fiction, fantasy, and horror.) While I have only tried my hand at writing horror once as a writing exercise, I have to admit I wish I could write the kind of horror that makes people shudder. (I have fantasies about writing in nearly every genre.)

But that got me wondering: What makes people shudder?

Horror movies these days certainly don’t give an answer about true horror; they’re all about making you gasp and jump. You’re not really scared but for the jump.

For me, there are two things that scare me the most:

  1. The cosmic, cold intelligence. I actually have to thank a new acquaintance on Writing Discussions for bringing this one up because, while it is something that scares me, I don’t come across it very often in what I read or watch. Yet, there is something about the idea of an otherworldly force that humanity doesn’t understand – and has no hope to understand – that is scary to me.
  2. Human evil. While it may sound cliché, the capacity of humans for evil acts is the scariest thing to me. Be it the child who kills, the adult who only knows how to dole out cruelty, or just the person you meet walking down the street who happens to have body parts in his/her basement freezer. There is just something about human evil that gets to me. Probably the fact that it’s possible for any of us…

Even so, those are only two examples of what horror writers use to get our hearts racing.

What scares you? What makes *good* horror?

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Editor Pricing Options

On my pet peeve post about self-publishers who don’t bother with editors, Miguel commented:

“Well if even natives mix lay with laid and lie, there’s hope for me. :)

Now a bit more seriously, I think the whole issue has to do with money. An editor, obviously, isn’t cheap, and it’s very easy to have a panic attack as the costs of self-publishing rises and rises.”

I felt the need to bring this up because I thought I may have come off as insensitive to self-publishers who don’t have big budgets. The fact of the matter is that, when having the conversation that inspired the pet peeve, I mentioned money troubles as a possible reason for not hiring a professional editor.

First off, my complaint about lack of editing comes from self-published books that have glaring mistakes – beginner mistakes. I wouldn’t complain over mistake here and there; we are all human and I make mistakes in my writing, too. It is when you compromise the quality of the book (and of the industry in some cases) that I start getting fussy.

With things being as they are, money is the big issue on most people’s minds. However, that is no excuse to skip a crucial step in the writing/publishing process.

If looking at the prices of editors online starts to get you feeling down, don’t stop looking! The people you are likely to find first are likely to be the more expensive editors. Just keep looking and you’ll find someone in your price range.

I assure you that there are plenty of freelance editors out there who don’t have a lot of credit to their names just yet who will edit your manuscript for cheaper prices. Heck, I’m one of them. Talk to people, use your networking skills both offline and off to find someone who is right for you.

And who knows? Maybe a friend of yours has an editing fetish you don’t know about and is willing to offer you a deal because you’re friends.

There are plenty of options out there; you just have to look for them.

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Sunday Scribblings 227 – Half-way

Is there someone that you need to meet half-way? Is there something you have half done? Are you half-way to something or someone? Have you ever hit the wall half-way there? Is it better to be half-way there than at the beginning? Are you happier half-way there because you are afraid of the end? How do you feel about half-way?

There are many stories half-way finished in notebooks scattered around the flat. Colourful covers call to me, inviting me in to work on them, but I don’t. The characters always want something from me: life, a point, a page, a scene, a finish to their lives on the page.

They are a plague, these half-finished notebooks. They almost appear to multiply on their own. Like viruses, they infect other notebooks, filling up half way with dreams, characters and places… The viruses are not strong, though. They cannot complete without the human part: me.

I’m not happy with all my half-stories, and neither are my characters. I promise that I will get to them and finish their stories, but I don’t know if I’m up to keeping that promise. All I know is that I’m trying to.

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Pet Peeve 17 – Nausea

Some people claim the way the English language works only does so to piss them off.

Sometimes I’m inclined to agree.

Nausea, nauseous, nauseated… This is one of those things people get wrong so much it’s almost becoming the normal way to say it despite being incorrect. In fact, I don’t recall anyone ever using it right in my presence.

Putting it simply:

Nausea = Sickness of the stomach, an ill feeling, a feeling one my vomit. It’s a noun. A feeling.

Nauseous = Causing nausea. Think about this the next time you claim you are nauseous. You may very well be, but I have yet to encounter a person who makes me want to vomit on sight. Let’s assume you’re not.

Nauseated = Feeling nausea, about to vomit. Do you have an “icky” feeling? Then you’re feeling nauseated. Smell something bad that makes you want to vomit? You’re feeling nauseated. Not nauseous.

The nauseous smell invades your senses and causes nausea.

The nauseous smell invades your senses and causes you to feel nauseated.

The feeling of nausea came this morning, and you’ve been feeling nauseated since.

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I write like…

I write like
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Sunday Scribblings 226 – I’d like to thank…

This week you are going to write your acceptance speech. Whether it is your Oscar’s speech, the dedication page from your book, or some other award, make sure it is for the award that is the most important one you can think of. In that moment of accepting your prize, who are you going to thank and why? What would you like to say to the people in your life who have helped you get this far? Who do you need to acknowledge?

To my loving husband, who has saved my life in more ways than just the literal. Your never-ending support and encouragement has inspired me to go places and do things I never thought possible for me. Your love is a beautiful thing that I never dreamed I would be fortunate enough to call my own. You are my lover, my friend and my muse. You make me a better person.

Eternally grateful,

Your Wife

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