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Me on Tour?
Posted by JM in Editing, Online Book Tours on June 3, 2011
For three years now I have worked as an online tour coordinator, connecting authors to bloggers. It hasn’t been an easy road. There have been authors who thought my services were wonderful and others who happily emailed me every time any single thing (most out of my control) went wrong. Some appreciated the help while others expected miracles.
All in all, I still love what I do with all my heart. I love surrounding myself with books and the people who write them, even though I can only do it in a virtual sense.
In July, I’ll move to the other side. Due to a lot of convincing on Dorothy’s part, I’m putting So You Want to Write a Guest Post on tour.
You’d think that afer doing it as long as I have, putting myself on tour would be a no-brainer. But I find myself feeling very shy about the whole thing. The technical side, the side I work for every month for authors, is no problem. But me ‘out there’? Showing my work to the world?
I am gaining a whole new level of respect and appreciation for the authors who honour me by having me coordinate their tours. They put their hard-worked creations in my hands in a way different to everyone else.
I’m feeling a bit sentimental now, yes, and I’m sorry I’m getting a bit soppy. I am simply so grateful to all the authors I have coordinated tours for, not only for the obvious but for inspiring me to write the guide that will be going on tour in July.
Pre-Editor Editing Tips
With Echo Falls being so near to completion and some new editing work falling on my desk, editing is on my mind for more than one reason. When it comes to editing, people usually love it or hate it. If you hate it, that’s okay because there are people called editors out there who actually like to do it. However, you can help your editor’s stress levels stay low by doing your own editing before you send it off.
At the very least, you should:
1. Use the spellcheck and grammar check. The grammar check can be a bit of a piss off sometimes, but it’s still useful. Use it!
Note: Editors are not your human spell-checkers. If there are a lot spelling mistakes in your piece, don’t be surprised if people don’t want to edit your work and/or you get charged more.
2. Read your work out loud. I cannot tell people this one enough. People don’t do it because they feel silly, but it’s the easiest way to weed out odd-sounding phrases and sentences.
3. Put it away for a while and come back to it later. ‘Fresh’ eyes are a very important part of your writer’s toolbox and they only cost you a bit of your time (during which you should be working on something else anyway, so it’s not really a cost after all). A little distance can be just the thing you need to catch all the little things you didn’t notice before.
Doing all these things before you hire an editor will not only make your editor’s job easier, it could just make your bill cheaper as well.
PS. If you absolutely must have a friend look at your manuscript, just do yourself a favor and make sure to pick the friend who always talks about how much s/he loves ‘tearing manuscripts to bits’. S/he may not be a professional, but s/he is closer to it than Aunt Sally.
Done!
Remember this?
Well, I am finally done. Yay! Happy dance time.
While I’m not done in the sense of sending it off to anyone yet, I am done in the sense that the major overhaul (aka my edit) is done and now I’ve sent it to the trusted people who will nitpick and lead to more edits (but hopefully only small ones).
There is something incredibly liberating about finishing this stage of the game and letting your manuscript ‘fly free’ to your beta readers. If you’re like me, you certainly don’t think it’s perfect but you think it’s come far enough to try walking on its own.
I have to admit I feel a little lost without it. I’ve been working on it through so many big changes in my life that it’s strange to be without it. But I am happy. And I am excited to move on. (Well, until I get the comments back, anyway.) I’ve been taking my time to catch up with other projects I’ve put off for the editing and getting ahead with work. But I have also been nosing around to see what I’m going to work on next.
Right now I’m leaning toward a novella-length romance featuring Emma and Dan who fall in love Down Under. I’m excited to bring more Australia into a piece, given that Echo Falls took place in a completely fictional location.
For today, though, it’s mostly work and relax.
And finally do some more unpacking.
Done!
Done, done, finally done!
Okay, so not quite done, but a big chunk done. I finally got through editing Echo Falls and now I just need to plug the changes into the computer before sending the doc off to my beta readers.
Yay!
Numbers Person
I have always had a passion for words and storytelling. Even before I could write, I could tell stories.
But I have also always had a love for numbers. Where words had a beauty of potential, numbers were always solid for me. (Well, until we got to imaginary numbers in algebra, but that wasn’t until I was a teen.)
That’s why I know I have to get to page 52.5 of my print-off to be halfway done with my editing. That’s why I know I need to edit five pages per day if I am going to make my deadline of February 26th.
I know I probably should use my time for editing instead of figuring out the maths that have to do with my editing, but I should be editing rather than blogging, too…
The numbers help me keep on task (most of the time) and help keep me calm. There is a reason I do number crossword puzzles instead of actual word ones.
Who said you have to either be a number person or a word person – never both?
Before & After
Remember this?
Healthy, happy, unassuming first draft just waiting for The Author’s hand to give it a bit of clean and polish before it went on its way to The Beta Readers… Well, things ended up being a little rougher than anticipated. Now it looks like this:
Poor, poor first draft, drowning in a flood of red ink.
As you may be able to tell:
1. I love editing.
2. Echo Falls is a rough draft amongst rough drafts.
I’m not someone who constantly revises nor am I someone who can’t let a story go. That is why I like to do one of these huge edits on the first round so I can get it to being a story I truly like. At the moment… Well, at the moment you can probably tell that I wrote most of Echo Falls sitting in front of the television until I realized that doesn’t work for me anymore.
I sent the first three chapters to a friend and she already found a continuity edit. Eesh. Albeit, a small one, but still…
Despite all the red ink, I still genuinely feel good about Echo Falls and its potential. I still think it could turn out to be my first published novel.
Potential
When it comes down to it, I’m still a paper and pen kind of editor. While I have mostly weaned myself off longhand writing, seeing it on paper is still what turns on my inner editor.
That and the red pen.
I see a first draft in a similar way to how I see a blank page – potential. Of course, having the draft there is much less intimidating than a blank page. I can rip apart the first draft all I want, but I’ll never have that blank page horror of marring something that is, in effect, perfect as it is. But either way, there is potential.
I’ve heard from many writers that they hate editing. They hate it but consider it a necessary evil of the craft. Personally, I quite like it. For me, it’s a form of character love (obsession?). The story isn’t done! Once again I get to drift back into this world I have created and make it better. (Oooh, can I make it better…)
I know that Echo Falls needs a lot of work, but that’s what revisions are for. Nothing is in a solid state, and I can play as I please. As I paged through on a skim, I wondered why I had even put in chapter numbers. There will be added in scenes; I know this even before I start.
At this point, my only nagging doubt is that I may be trying to polish a turd. But until I figure my way around this pile of coal dust and rock, I can’t know that. So I concentrate on the joy of saying hello to my characters once again. I may have only said goodbye just a week ago, but I have missed them.
Do you like editing or loathe it? Somewhere in between?
Editor Pricing Options
On my pet peeve post about self-publishers who don’t bother with editors, Miguel commented:
“Well if even natives mix lay with laid and lie, there’s hope for me.
Now a bit more seriously, I think the whole issue has to do with money. An editor, obviously, isn’t cheap, and it’s very easy to have a panic attack as the costs of self-publishing rises and rises.”
I felt the need to bring this up because I thought I may have come off as insensitive to self-publishers who don’t have big budgets. The fact of the matter is that, when having the conversation that inspired the pet peeve, I mentioned money troubles as a possible reason for not hiring a professional editor.
First off, my complaint about lack of editing comes from self-published books that have glaring mistakes – beginner mistakes. I wouldn’t complain over mistake here and there; we are all human and I make mistakes in my writing, too. It is when you compromise the quality of the book (and of the industry in some cases) that I start getting fussy.
With things being as they are, money is the big issue on most people’s minds. However, that is no excuse to skip a crucial step in the writing/publishing process.
If looking at the prices of editors online starts to get you feeling down, don’t stop looking! The people you are likely to find first are likely to be the more expensive editors. Just keep looking and you’ll find someone in your price range.
I assure you that there are plenty of freelance editors out there who don’t have a lot of credit to their names just yet who will edit your manuscript for cheaper prices. Heck, I’m one of them. Talk to people, use your networking skills both offline and off to find someone who is right for you.
And who knows? Maybe a friend of yours has an editing fetish you don’t know about and is willing to offer you a deal because you’re friends.
There are plenty of options out there; you just have to look for them.
Introducing the Perfectionist
Hello there. How are you?
Perfection: That greeting wasn’t warm enough.
Nice to see you to. Sorry, but I have to start writing now. It’s been a while since I have.
Perfection: Writing? How can you possibly write when your office is a mess, you have other work to do, you don’t know what you’re going to eat for dinner, you don’t have the right music –
I think you can see where this is going. Like many writers (writers who have a talent for procrastination, especially) I often become the victim of my perfectionist voice. The voice which is never satisfied with the surroundings, the music, the state of the world, the state of hunger…
If you have the power and determination to actually sit down and write, then you have to deal with the perfectionist voice doubting your writing voice, your ability, your talent (if you can convince your voice that you have any), and your future prospects in the world of writing among other things.
Needless to say, I don’t get a lot of writing done when I listen to the voice for too long. My two biggest problems (excuses) are the thought I have other things to do or not having a great writing environment.
Things you can do to get past your perfectionist:
*Make a goal of writing in different places.
*Don’t think about writing too long before you do it. Decide on writing and then do it.
*Freewrite before you start in on writing in your work in progress.
Do you have any other tricks to getting past your perfectionist?
Avoidance Tactics
Okay. The house is quiet – as quiet as it will ever get, anyway – and it’s time to write. No distractions, just pure writing time. Pure writing time that you have been waiting for so long. Now you can get cracking on the current work in progress and –
Hey! Look! Is that snow? I think that’s snow. Gosh, the first snow of the season. Lovely. Oh, shoot. Did I forget to do laundry? I haven’t even thought about dinner tonight…
No one can procrastinate like writers can. We’re a strange bunch; when it comes to actually sitting down and writing, our attention span suddenly morphs into that of a hummingbird’s. Scrubbing the kitchen floor never looks as appealing as it does when you have your novel to work on.
Some writers have no problems with this. Or so I’ve heard.
I’m a procrastinator of the highest order. If I have time, I’m tired. If I’m not tired, I have other things to do. If I don’t have other things to do, I don’t have the right notebook, pen, lighting, chair… Yeah, I’ve even used the chair excuse.
Don’t take this to mean that I don’t love writing. I do. However, when you get a case of the Evil Editors playing with your brain and let them win once, it’s like you give bunnies Viagra and set them loose; suddenly, the next time you go to write, you have thousands of Evil Editors in your brain telling you why you suck. A lot.
After my Evil Editors grew to plague numbers, I decided to come up with three things to help me focus:
1. Remind yourself that all you are doing is playing games with yourself.
2. Ask yourself what you’re so afraid of.
And
3. If the EEs still exist, give them room to roam on a blank page. Then pick them off in any way you choose.
I prefer a machete.




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